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Revision 53 . . November 20, 2005 23:47 by dhcp-80c46a6a.la-aldea.arizona.edu
  

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Changed: 45c45,59
(To the best of my knowledge, the Quiet Place is next to Olin where the water is... make of the geography what you will)
(The golf carts of the Registraaargh drive across Liquidamber Mall. Pippin tries to call to Merry, who is unconscious and has a nasty gash on his right brow.)

Pippin: Merry. Merry!

(He receives no response. Suddenly, a Registraaargh near the front puts up his hand and signals a stop.)

Ugl˙k: What is it? What do you smell?

Registraaargh: ''(He sniffs the air)'

Squid.

Pippin: (He speaks quietly to himself)

Gimli!

Changed: 47c61,65
(Aragorn is standing in the parking lot behind Parsons, looking for the golf carts of the Registraaaargh they are tracking. Nearby, Eckert cackles maniacally as he chainsaws guinea pigs)
Ugl˙k: They've picked up our trail! Let's go!

(The Registraaargh quicken their pace. Pippin struggles to reach his AIDS ribbon with his teeth. He then tears it off his t-shirt and drops it onto the ground. A wheel drives over the ribbon but it remains unbroken and visible in the grass.)

(Later, Aragorn is standing in the parking lot behind Parsons, looking for the golf carts of the Registraaaargh they are tracking. Nearby, Eckert cackles maniacally as he chainsaws guinea pigs)

Removed: 197,216d214
(The golf carts of the Registraaargh drive across Liquidamber Mall. Pippin tries to call to Merry, who is unconscious and has a nasty gash on his right brow.)

Pippin: Merry. Merry!

(He receives no response. Suddenly, a Registraaargh near the front puts up his hand and signals a stop.)

Ugl˙k: What is it? What do you smell?

Registraaargh: ''(He sniffs the air)'

Squid.

Pippin: (He speaks quietly to himself)

Gimli!

Ugl˙k: They've picked up our trail! Let's go!

(The Registraaargh quicken their pace. Pippin struggles to reach his AIDS ribbon with his teeth. He then tears it off his t-shirt and drops it onto the ground. A wheel drives over the ribbon but it remains unbroken and visible in the grass.)


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